The video was very exciting and kept my attention. The background music was perfect, it made the book come to life! Your organization of your pictures and captions from the book were very impressive, and well thought through.
The only thing I noticed was that your in between sentences were weak.
You said: And refuses more but Sam keeps trying.
You could have said something like: After Sam's friends dismiss the Green Eggs and Ham, Sam persist they try it.
The video was very exciting and kept my attention. The background music was perfect, it made the book come to life! Your organization of your pictures and captions from the book were very impressive, and well thought through.
ReplyDeleteThe only thing I noticed was that your in between sentences were weak.
You said: And refuses more but Sam keeps trying.
You could have said something like: After Sam's friends dismiss the Green Eggs and Ham, Sam persist they try it.